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Post by Breezey Breezey on Wed Jul 04, 2012 9:00 pm

A Call For Rain

I've been waiting for a rain fall
The weather says no chance at all
When I complete my simple dance
It should increase a rainstorm chance

Legs apart with determined stance
Face transforms into peacefull trance.
Eyes are staring with studied intent
Knowing this dance will leave me spent

hair down my back is flowing free
Right leg moves with slight bend of knee
Arms are stretched up really high
Hands reach out toward Heaven's sky

My Feet are moving now, swift and fleet
Thinking how rain would tame the heat
Head goes way back as face seeks sky
Pace picks up and I seem to fly.

Turning, twirling around and around,
Feet come down to meet dry ground
Thoughts of rain are filling my mind
The time approaches to unwind

Slowly coming to a stand still
begging the sky to do my will
Face up, waiting expectantly.....


Raindrops fall in reply to me.


Breezey Breezey

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Post by roxanna on Thu Jul 05, 2012 1:47 am

just gorgeous ! dance smiley

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Post by Breezey Breezey on Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:57 am

lol looks like that smiley is doing a rain dance too!

I suppose somebody with more writing experience could "polish" it up, but then... I think it loses the "me" part that makes it mine.
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Post by roxanna on Thu Jul 05, 2012 7:19 am

Breezey Breezey wrote:lol looks like that smiley is doing a rain dance too!

I suppose somebody with more writing experience could "polish" it up, but then... I think it loses the "me" part that makes it mine.
Thank you, Roxanna. smile2 love shower

no polish up, spontainiety (I've tried every possible version of spelling that,what the heck is it?) is more appealing,keep the 'me' that's what makes it.

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Post by Breezey Breezey on Thu Jul 05, 2012 1:28 pm

spontaneity? lol

And I agree with you. Too many times, people try to make everyone do things the same way.

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Post by Tater Salad on Fri Jul 06, 2012 1:59 am

Spontaneity. I think. It's one of those French words, I think.

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