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Comfort

Post by P on Sun Sep 21, 2014 4:45 pm

I found out today that this has joined the ranks of published works.


Comfort.

When you encounter rocks
Along your path through life,
Take comfort.
Feel my hand upon your shoulder
And call me friend,
For you are not alone.
Watch those rocks
Crumble to sand
As the warm sun rises
On a shining new day.
Walk on along the beach of life
And watch the silver waves
Break upon the golden sands.
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Re: Comfort

Post by lorry p on Sun Sep 21, 2014 8:55 pm

That is beautiful P.. A work of yours I am gathering.. If so.. congratulations.

Sitting on a beach of Gold.. Mike and the Mechanics... surf smile sunny
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Re: Comfort

Post by P on Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:12 am

Im pleased if any of my ramblings comfort, please, gratify, or even inspire. Most of my scribblings are totally unsuitable for our local rag although I spam the editor unmercifully, and Im sure her bottom drawer is overflowing with the stuff. They appear with little graphic embelishments so I suppose she has a drawer full of those as well to get rid of. Sometimes Ill be writing three at once, one of the reasons I write in blank verse, I just cant get the ideas down fast enough and have to operate in parallel thought mode.  Mostly nothing for months though.

I cant compete with the tallent of some painters though who have lorryloads of the stuff. The best paintings I ever produced were all before the age of 6!

I dont usually write limericks, but to lighten the mood heres one I wrote earlier, as they say. Its for a lady I just met on holiday (no names!) to make up for teasing her unmercifully.

Tattoos.

There was a young lady called Lynne
Who had terribly colourful skin.
When the sun was about
Her arms would come out.
You could see where she was all inked in.
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Re: Comfort

Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Sep 22, 2014 6:37 am

Good morning world! smile2

Comfort... can come from almost anyone who makes us feel that way...
I like it, P. Your words describe how a friend is really well. And it brings
someone to mind.

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Re: Comfort

Post by P on Mon Sep 22, 2014 7:23 am

Hi Breezey, youre up early!

If anyone has a friend in need of a little comfort at any time please feel free to use this poem with my compliments, Im told it has already brought comfort to some so it seems to work.
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