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Those Moments Between Time

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Those Moments Between Time

Post by P on Tue May 26, 2015 11:21 am

Here's one I'd forgotton about, but I see that Victoria has been delving in her bottom drawer in desperation and has decided to publish it in full. Let me know if you figure it out, just in case anyone askes me.

Those Moments Between Time.

When night departs
And I return
From that other world.
Floating upwards,
Towards conciousness.

I pause,

Just below the surface of reality.
I clearly see,
Through the waters of soul,
The pretty pebbles below.
The deep pools of emotion,
The salmon of knowledge swimming deep.
The diamonds of love shining,
The fools gold of desire.

And then I break through.
Take a first deep breath.
The surface is disturbed.
The ripples spread.
The waters cloud.
And all I see is my reflection.


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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by Tater Salad on Wed May 27, 2015 2:03 am

To me, it's that moment when you realize you are dreaming, but still aren't quite awake.

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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by P on Wed May 27, 2015 7:02 am

I think that the trick is in the "pause" bit! and then preferably back down for another couple of hours.


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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by Tater Salad on Thu May 28, 2015 5:26 am

Seems to me that no matter how hard you try, if you wake up before the dream is over, you can almost never figure out the ending.

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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by P on Thu May 28, 2015 6:15 am

Don't you find that life IS a dream. I haven't quite got as far as figuring out the ending. Faced with that eventuality I guess it tends to focus the mind, and you find ou what you never really realised before, what is really important to you!



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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by Tater Salad on Fri May 29, 2015 4:03 am

The ending isn't important; the journey matters more than the destination. Enjoy it while it lasts, because you can't turn back.

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Post by P on Fri May 29, 2015 4:42 am

You'd be surprised how convoluted a journey can be, especially when my wifes navigating!



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Re: Those Moments Between Time

Post by Tater Salad on Fri May 29, 2015 5:02 am

Yeah, but I bet that makes you appreciate the destination that much more, when you finally arrive!

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Post by P on Fri May 29, 2015 8:36 am

Not if the bar is closed by then!


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