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Just A Dream

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Just A Dream

Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:16 pm

She stands beside the rusted gate
A prisoner of her self made fate
She wishes for the things she needs
She plants those needs with dreaming seeds
Strong of will and kind of heart
This is where she thinks it starts
In her dreams he is just a man
Who holds her heart like no other can
She waits there patiently every day
For the time he'll eventually find his way
To that rusty gate and a hurting heart
To unite their dreams and make a new start
In her heart this dream is true
She feels that time will pay it's due

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Post by hoaloha on Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:27 pm

Did you write that, it's beautiful, absolutely beautiful Very Happy Very Happy
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:22 pm

Thank you Ron. I wrote it. smile2 I brought it over from old Yafooey. It's one of the topics I wanted moved.

I once added more to it and sent it to Tithe. He is the only one who has the added part. Even I don't remember exactly what I wrote, but know it was about the dream coming true.

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Post by hoaloha on Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:27 pm

It was beautiful. I can almost feel how you feel, you're writing is so good. You put so much feeling in what you write, you're very ,very good. OH, does everyone know about this site yet? I saw everyone still on the old site. These smiley's are great, thanks. :lol:
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:34 pm

I seem to be able to write poetry only at certain times. Sometimes, a poem will go through my mind, but later... I 'll forget what I was thinking.
When I am sad or happy or whatever.. I write about what is going through my mind or how my heart feels.


As for the other members, I don't want to have them all here until the site is done. They know about it, but I still have things to do. I think the main part of posting should still go on at the old Yafooey.

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