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DANCING WITH WOLVES

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DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:19 am

DANCING WITH WOLVES

I should learn
To read signs from your eyes,
Words from your fingers,
Anger from your silence,
Hurt from your smiles.
I should not heed
Your hostile battle cry
When your head tilts to beckon mine
Into your orbit of fight.

I should instead
Seek the moon
Shrouded in your clouds.
A brightness that often hides
Within your rituals of pride.
Learn to hear the winds
Whining from your heart.
The secret sighs of night
Cast among your quiet qualms.

If I could dance
With your wild wolves...
Howling, screaming,
Breaking loose inside,
Then I could tame
Your vicious fraction
That frays and fritters
Your beautiful icon.

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:09 am

I really like this!
It's different from what I'm use to and gets to my imagination... picturing it all.
I like your style of writing....
You definitely have talent!

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:35 am

Hey thanks, Breezey!
My comp. just lost connection a long while ago. Good enough that I was able to scare it off to reconnect me again *lol*

And I like your rhymes as well. Wink
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:42 am

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Glad to see your connection is back.

Is a lot of your poetry like this?

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Mon Aug 16, 2010 9:01 am

Yeah, mostly... though I did have fixed rhymes in some of my poems before. But I kinda shifted to more smooth way like pouring it all 'just as it is' from inside....like no restrictions for the feelings? *lol*
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Mon Aug 16, 2010 9:06 am

I would think the more a person writes, the more that person will find a style that suits his/her individuality. It looks to me like you've done that. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by JackRabbit on Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:52 am

Very nice, Eink!dancing bunny
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Ja'aj on Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:07 pm

Hi, Eink!
It's nice to have you join us again!
(I reccommend a swift sharp KICK to the 'puter's posterior) -
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I like your post! Thanks for sharing it!

Bunny!
GREAT pic! Thank you too! Wolves are so pretty!

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:12 am

Thanks, jack!
Wow! Really would have said it best with your wolves picture there! Fantastic! hang in there Scared me a bit though when they stared at me? (Are they full enough? what )
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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:26 am

Hey, ja'aj! Thanks!
I'd tried even more than that, ya'know? I ended up renailing the strewn screws from my table, and mapping dry the floor for the spills of my 'frape'. *lol*
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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:31 am

Thanks, Breezey!
Your style is definitely more professional as it follows the meter and rhyme that characterize a good poem.
And it soothes your neat and orderly personality. Wink
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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by roxanna on Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:36 am

thank you both breezey and eink, i love your poems, what a woderful gift you have. heart smiley

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Breezey Breezey on Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:44 am

Eink and Roxanna, thank you? smile2 A lot of thanking going on here! [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

Eink, is poetry "really" supposed to be professional, by certain standards, or is it suppose to touch others and make a difference, no matter what style is used? Just something I often think about.

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Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:58 am

Actually, that's just what the 'academics' put in our minds. To me though, poetry is an art. A 'special language' than begins like a "lump in the throat", forming a thought, a certain longing,.. and finds the words to express it.
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Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:01 am

Hi, Rox!
Yeah, we'll be thanking one another like passing a ball on one hand to another *lol*.... Still, it's so nice to be part of this beautiful community. smile2
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:09 am

Eink wrote:Actually, that's just what the 'academics' put in our minds. To me though, poetry is an art. A 'special language' than begins like a "lump in the throat", forming a thought, a certain longing,.. and finds the words to express it.

That might explain why I only write at certain times. I can't seem to just write a poem at any given time or about just anything. It's usually something I feel...

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Ja'aj on Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:10 pm

Eink,
Yeah... that's the drawback of tantrums, isn't it? [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Oh well...
by the time I'm finished cleaning up the mess I've made, I'm
- usually - over whatever provoked it.

It's great to see you here!
Again, WELCOME!! to the neighborhood!
Now let's see if you can keep your connection to 'Fooey
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Post by Ja'aj on Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:18 pm

Eink wrote:Actually, that's just what the 'academics' put in our minds. To me though, poetry is an art. A 'special language' than begins like a "lump in the throat", forming a thought, a certain longing,.. and finds the words to express it.

'Acedemics' (?) are there (ideally) to teach how to put what we feel onto
paper so others can share it.

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is the amount of satisfaction the writer receives from having done it.

If others understand it and "relate" to it, it becomes popular.
That's nice - especially! if it's a "calling"...

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Re: DANCING WITH WOLVES

Post by Eink on Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:22 am

Hey, thanks, Ja'aj! So darn riiiiight you are 'bout the 'writer' stuff. And the "calling"? Yeah, I believe in that too. Yoooooooo hooooooo!!!
I'm so enjoying you guys! throw kiss
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:29 am

Someone "calling"? smile2
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I enjoy writing.. not sure I'd want to be on deadlines for it....

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