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THE THIEF

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THE THIEF

Post by Eink on Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:09 am

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THE THIEF

Catfully she walked
One mid day
In my in-between nap.
Smooth and suave,
She wore a mask,
And I guess, a forty-five?
Scoured through my shelves
And through my archives.
She walked even closer
Swinging her caliber…
Tongued its muzzle.
Slightly ran it down my head…
Steel-cold kisses on my nose,
And my cheeks,
And my lips.
Pointing it right on my chest.
She stared deep,
And puzzled a sweet smile.
I closed my eyes
In purple prayer
When her index slipped
On the trigger…
Hell! Was it forever
Anticipating unwanted death?
Half conscious for the blast,..
Was it heaven I got in next?

A thief walked brave
One mid day
In my in-between nap.
Smooth and suave,
Her eyes were dark.
She stole my helpless heart
In broad daylight.

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Post by Breezey Breezey on Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:44 am

Interesting... and really has me thinking... The meaning isn't immediately obvious... giving this some thought.
I'll be back.

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Post by Ja'aj on Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:50 am

Hi, Eink!
Um... your poem ...
is that the way you see romance?

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Post by Breezey Breezey on Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:15 pm

I see this in different ways, but always end with a stolen heart. Symbolizes a heart taken unaware and in a startling way?

Whatever my interpretation, I like it. smile2

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Post by Eink on Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:52 am

Ja'aj wrote:Hi, Eink!
Um... your poem ...
is that the way you see romance?

Hi, ja'aj!
Uhmmmm, it's like... it just happened? And I was caught in total surrender? *lol* (Romance is thizzzz?) Just one of those 'nuts', I guess love shower
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Post by Eink on Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:57 am

Thanks, Breezey! Exactly! Love attacks mostly when we're so left off guard. Watch out! shocked
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:26 am

Love attacks... never thought of it quite that way before.
To give in is such sweet surrender, though....

On the serious side... I know some people honestly do see love as an attack of their emotions. The more I think about that, the more it fits.

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Post by Eink on Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:39 am

(*and now,.. seems like I got her agree to that ---- attack) winner
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Post by Breezey Breezey on Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:49 am

I see that makes you... humble. lol

You gave a new way to look at it, see it.... now, keep in mind not everyone sees it that way. lol

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